Friday, May 30, 2008
Pretty Mouth and Green Eyes
In the story there is a conversation that is going on with the gray haired man and Arthur. They are talking about the Arhturs girlfriend who is not in his house so Arthur is worrying about her and talking to the gray haired man the whole time over the phone about how he is living with her. Arthur is not sleeping or letting the man sleep so he wants to go over to his house to have a drink.The gray man did not respond to him and as he did he was lighting a cigarette and had fallen on the couch he was in and lit him on fire. The gray haired man just sat there not caring anymore about anything. The characters in the story are Joanie, Arthur, the gray haired man. I think that the story was confusing but good because of the dialog that was going on back and forth. It was interesting because you had to find out what they were talking about over the phone.
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You don't sound confusing about it, it seems that you understand it. Also I like how you said that you liked the dialog and how it was written. I liked your response as well.
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